爱华网作文改错很容易混淆，总觉得哪个都对，其实不是哦。下面是小编给大家整理的一些初中英语书面表达与改错，供大家参阅!
书面表达与改错篇1：
I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________
such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________
songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3.________
interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________
to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________
and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________
able to improving the friendship between China and7.________
the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________
And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________
harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens!10.________
答案与解析：
1.hobby→hobbies many后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。
2.piano前加the play the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。
3.去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。
4.√
5.But→So 前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。
6.west→western 依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。
7.improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。
8.hoped→hope 这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。
9.去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。
10.how→what no matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。
书面表达与改错篇2：
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案与解析：
1.am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。
2.but→and 此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。
3.删去第二个the 一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。
4.spend→cost 本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
5.had→have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。
6.what→that/which或删去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。
7.them→us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。
8.possibly→possible as...as possible表示“尽可能……”。
9.prevent前加to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语。
10.√
书面表达与改错篇3：
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案与解析：
1.去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2.month→months month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3.interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4.him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5.do→did 根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6.√
7.beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8.will→would 这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9.surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10.said后加was what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。
