爱华网收到了关于2010-2011高三期末检测的来稿，南航附中杨静老师和南京三中陈嵘老师推荐几位弟子在期末检测现场的作文，并且做了简短的点评。我认为，师生之间的交流不可或缺，值得大家借鉴与学习。
我们知道，写出一篇饱满、流畅、准确的英语作文非常重要。这需要学生有一定的英语学习和阅读的基础，要求学生反复地练习和修改，当然更需要关注书面表达的技术问题。首先要紧扣主题突出重点。动笔之前，针对提示的文字或图片必须先认真审题，组织内容，构思提纲，理顺思路，切忌偏题离题，要避免条理不清，重点不突出的失误。其次要表达流畅。强调使用课本上学到过的单词、词组、句型，确保文章简洁通顺，切忌使用冷僻单词，避免使用不规范的中文式表达。再次要结构规范、时态无误。准确判断时态，语态的应用，不能交叉混杂，这部分则能充分反映学生的思维判断能力。最后要注意单词拼写、标点符号，避免细节上的失误。
高三英语期末检测原题：
寒假即将来临，《中学生英语》杂志准备出版“快乐寒假”的专刊。请你写一篇150词左右的英语稿件，短文开头已写好，不计入总词数。内容包含下列要点：1.往年寒假难忘的一件事儿；2. 今年假日的打算，如娱乐、学习以及其他；3. 你的愿望。
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The winter holiday we are looking forward tois drawing near. The past holidays brought me many wonderfulmemories. Last year in the winter holiday, my parents and Iwent back to our hometown where there was a heavy snow. We playedand laughed. My father even made a snowman. I felt very happy andnow I hope I can have another holiday like this!
Thisyear, things have changed. As a Senior 3 student, I must preparefor the most important exam in my life. I decided to attend someextra classes and review what I have learned. However, all work andno play makes Jack a dull boy. I also decide to see some movies. Inaddition, the Spring Festival is coming. I need to go back to myhometown again and visit some of my family members.
Last butnot least, I have two New Year's wishes. The first one is that Ican have a better grade. The second one is very common but verynecessary, that is Happy Every Day!
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