爱华网EnglishWriting01
TheClassificationofWriting
Differenttypesofwritingfordifferentpurposes
1)writingforentertainment(creativewriting,suchasnovels,storiesandpoems).
2)Writingforinformation.(researchpapersandnewpaperreports).
Ifweconsiderthesocialaspectsofwriting,classificationcanbeA.Informalwriting,suchasprivatejournals,notestofriends,andpersonalletters.
B.Formalwriting,suchaslettersofapplication,lettersofinquiry,andbusinesscommunication.
Myclassification：
Writingtoamuseoneselforothers.
RequirementsofPETS-5Writing
Topic——closelyrelatedtothedirection
Language——formal
Grammar——correct&skillfulinusingwordsandmakingsentences
Manuscriptform——Proper&pretty
HowtoMaketheManuscriptFormCorrect
LeavingMargin&Indent
"Howshouldparentshelpchildrentobeindependent"
nowadays,manyparentsdoallthethingsfortheirchildren,becausetheythinkitisthebestwaytoprotecttheirchildrenfromsufferingdifficulties.thoughitisfortheloveoftheirchildren,itcannothelpchildrentobeindependent.
Inmyopinion,tohelpchildrentobeindependent,parentsshoulddoasfollows.Firstly,theyshouldlettheirchildrendosomesimplethingssuchaswashclothes,makeupbed,cleanroom.Secondly,believeinyourchildisveryimportant.insteadoforderingtheirchildrentodothetingsthattheyhavebeenplannedfortheirchildren,theyshouldbelievetheirchildrencanmaketheirwisedecisionthemselves.finally,whathelpchildrenbestistoencouragechildrentohandlethingsindependent,nomatterhowdifficultyitis,thentheywillnevercryeasilywhenfaceuptoproblemstheyhaveneverexperienced.
Parentscanlovechildreninmanyways,butthebestwaytolovechildrenistohelpthemtobeindependent.
Handerwriting
Writecarefullysothatthecompostioncanbereadeasily.
Drawathicklineacrossthewordsthatiswronglyorinappropriatelyspelledorused.
Sticktooneofthe2writingstyles,loopingorprinting
Capitalization
a.titleb.quotationc.propernouns
d.thebeginningletterofasentence
Title
a.inthemiddleofthefirstline
b.capitalizationofthetitle
c.noperiod
Punctuationmark
nottobeginalineby:comma/period(fullstop)/semicolon/colon/questionmark/exclamation
nottoendalinewiththefirsthalfofbrackets/quotationmarks/parentheses(roundbarckets)
someotherbasicrulesonusingpunctuationmarkslikecomma,periodandquestionmarks
e.g.
Faulty:itwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefields.
Improved:Itwasraininghard;theycouldnotworkinthefields.
Itwasraininghard.Theycouldnotworkinthefields.
Itwasrainingsohardthattheycouldnotworkinthefields.
Theycouldnotworkinthefieldsbecauseitwasraininghard.
Itwasraininghard,sotheycouldnotworkinthefields.
Asitwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefields.
Thesentencesmarked“faulty”arenotgrammaticallywrong;theyarefaultybecauseoftheuseofthecommas.Itiseasytoseethattheimprovedsentenceslaystressondifferentpoints.Whichoneispreferabledependsonthecontextandonthewriter’sintention.
Faulty:Iwasborninasmalltown,inthetowntherewasonlyoneschool,Istudiedthereforsixyears.
Improved:Iwasborninasmalltown.Inthetowntherewasonlyoneschool.Istudiedthereforsixyears.
InthesmalltownwhereIwasborn,therewasonlyonschool,andIstudiedthereforsixyears.
Iwasborninasmalltown,wheretherewasonlyoneschool.Istudiedthereforsixyears.
IstudiedforsixyearsattheonlyschoolinthesmalltownwhereIwasborn.
ASkillinUsingSound
Smileandsilencearetwopowerfultools.Smileisthewaytosolvemanyproblemsandsilenceisthewaytoavoidmanyproblems.
Alliteration
Alliterationistherepetitionofthesameconsonantsoundinseveralwordsclosetogetherinasentenceorinaline.
e.g.1)Comelivewithmeandbemylove
Andwewillallthepleasureprove
2)Playitdownandprayitup.
淡然面对灾难，但求时来运转
3)Thesilenceoftheeveningissmoothedoutlikeslicksilk.
夜晚的静谧就像光滑的绸子一样被抚平。
Thefunctionofalliteration:
1.Humorouseffectinsound
2.Arhetoricaldevice
3.Alliterationisnotonlycommoninliterarytext,butalsocommontoappearintitlesofarticles
头韵的使用范围
用于诗歌中
用于散文、演说、政论等正式文体中
用于谚语、警句、格言、熟语及成对词中
用于书名和文章标题中
用于广告词中
用于文字游戏，如绕口令中
WhenIAmDead,MyDearest
byChristinaGeorginaRossetti
WhenIamdead,mydearest,
Singnosadsongsforme;
Plantthounorosesatmyhead,
Norshadycypresstree:
Bethegreengrassaboveme
Withshowersanddewdropswet:
Andifthouwilt,remember,
Andifthouwilt,forget
Ishallnotseetheshadows,
Ishallnotfeeltherain;
Ishallnothearthenightingale
Singonasifinpain:
Anddreamingthroughthetwilight
Thatdothnotrisenorset,
HaplyImayremember,
Andhaplymayforget
用于演讲词
“Thisgenerationofsoldiers,sailors,airmen,Marines,andCoastGuardsmenhavevolunteeredinthetimeofcertaindanger.Theyarepartofthefinestfightingforcethattheworldhaseverknown.Theyhaveservedtouraftertourofdutyindistant,different,anddifficultplaces...Theyaremenandwomen--white,black,andbrown--ofallfaithsandallstations--allAmericans,servingtogethertoprotectourpeople,whilegivingothershalfaworldawaythechancetoleadabetterlife....Intoday’swars,there'snotalwaysasimpleceremonythatsignalsourtroops’success--nosurrenderpaperstobesigned,orcapitaltobeclaimed....”
--BarackObama,FortHoodMemorialServiceSpeech
用于书名和文章标题中
PrideandPrejudice
SenseandSensibility
Bulletorballot
Bye,Bye,BalancedBudget
Pei’sPyramidsPuzzleParis
贝氏的金字塔使巴黎困惑
StarlightonSkyline,GalaxyofGlamour
高楼摩天，星光灿烂；火树银花，瑰丽绝伦。
FairnessandForgiveness（公平与宽容）
用于广告词
FreshfromtheFarm（FarmRestaurant）
Sea,Sun,Sand,Seclusion----andSpain!
在海边、有阳光、有沙滩、幽静----更有西班牙风情！（旅馆广告）
Youwillwonderwheretheyellowwent
IfyoucleanyourteethwithPepsodent.
如果你用劲力牌牙膏刷牙，你的牙齿就会洁白无瑕。
C&C——TheComputerandCommunicationCompanyhelpsyougetthemostoutof“digital.”
Forcomfort,convenience,superbserviceandmoreflightstoJapan——YOUCANDEPENDONUS.（CathayPacific）
用于tonguetwister
Shesellsseashellsontheseashore.
她在海边买蚌壳。
PeterPiperpickedapeckofpickledpepper.
笛师彼得买了一佩克泡辣椒。
Roundandroundtheruggedrocktheraggedrascalran.
衣衫褴褛的无赖绕着凹凸不平的岩石团团转。
常见头韵词和头韵短语(alliterationphrase
safeandsound平平安安
fairandsquare堂堂正正
partandparcel主要部分
hideandhair连皮带毛
scrapeandscrew省吃俭用
greenasgrass幼稚无知
clearascrystal水晶般清澈
rightasrain丝毫不错
nowornever机不可失，失不再来
deepindebt债台高筑
withmightandmain竭尽全力
withantsinone’spants坐立不安
byguessandbygosh凭空瞎想
fromtoptotoe从头到脚
fallflat达不到预想效果。
TeachingPlan&TimeAllotment
Ageneralintroduction(1W)
Diction/TheChoiceOfWord(4W)
Sentence-making(3W)
FiguresofSpeech(1W)
Paragraphstyle(2W)
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