【英文作文】
学生学习负担过重
佳中
Directions:
Study thefollowing picture and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning,
2) state the problems caused by heavy burden in study,and
3) give your suggestion on how to lessen the burden.
构思
第一段:描述:男孩在抱怨他背的包是家里人中背的最大的包。
点题: 中小学生学习负担太重。
第二段: 起段: 学习负担过重造成许多问题。
问题: 1) 阻碍智力和多方面发展。
2) 潜力得不到充分发挥,生活质量受到影响。
3) 学生失去学习兴趣、厌学、甚至逃学(play truant)。
第三段: 起段: 采取措施减轻学生学习负担
建议: 1) 改革目前的教育体系。
2) 应注重培养学生的素质和实际能力。
3) 扩大中高等教育,减轻学生学习压力。
范文
In the picture wecan see that the littleboy is carrying with a very bigbag
stuffed withtextbooks. He is complaining that he is carryingthe biggest bag in the
family,much biggerthan the onesoften carried by his parentsand grandparents.
Through the picture,the drawertries to show that the studentsin primary and
secondary schoolsare heavily burdened with lessons and homework.
Too much stressand workload havebrought many problems tochildren. To begin
with, theyhinder the intellectual growthand all-round development of individuals.
The students areso busy with their lessons and homework every daythat they have no
adequatetime forhobbies andextracurricular activities.Consequently, their
potentialscan not befully developed and theirquality of life may be affected.
Moreover, due to a heavyburden, students may lose theirinterest in their study.
Some studentsfeel so bored with theirtextbooks and lessons that they oftenplay
truant.
Effectivemeasures shouldbe taken torelievethe stress and workloadof the
students.The present educational system should bereformed. More attention should
bepaid to the cultivation of thestudents’ practical abilities and theirpersonal
qualities.Besides, secondary and higher education shouldbe expanded so that more
opportunities can beprovided toyoung childrento relievethe pressure for
competition instudy.
(224 words)
译文
在画中我们可以看到,一个小男孩背着一个非常大的书包,里面塞满了书本。他抱怨他背的包
是家里人中背的最大的包, 比父母和爷爷奶奶背的都要大。通过图片,作者想要表明:现在中小
学学生的学习负担过重。
学习负担和压力过重会给孩子带来了许多问题。首先,阻碍学生个人的智力和多方面发展。学
生整天忙于功课, 没有足够的时间发展个人爱好和从事课外活动。因此,他们的潜力得不到充分发
挥,生活质量也受到影响。 此外,由于沉重的负担, 学生会失去学习兴趣。一些学生对学习厌倦、
甚至经常逃学。
要采取有效的措施来减轻学生压力和负担,目前的教育制度需要改革。要重视培养学生的素质
和实际能力。另外,要扩大中等和高等教育,给孩子提供更多的学习机,这样才能减轻他们的学习
竞争压力。