爱华网今天Miss美语发音跟大家分享一下之前Miss老师教学过程中总结出来的写作亮点部分内容。PPT就不放了。口语当中其实带也是如此，想说什么是英语思维，其实借助这些点，可以套一下。
这些绝招，是Miss在过去英语学习与教学中对英语特点得出的感悟与体会，一般并不见于市面上的书籍。不教写作了，但还是希望把这些东西留下来。最早上过Miss老师课程的学生应该都不陌生，把握好：结构，内容，最后亮点。
我希望大家通过运用这些绝招，使自己的英语妙笔生花。
在英语写作当中需要把握与中文不同的特点，主要绝招如下：
1. 把作文（通常为三四百词、分三段或四段）当中的几句主动式改为背动式。汉语很少使用被动式，被动句占总句子的5%，而英语中被动句则占到了15%。因此，在写完作文后要有意思地把几句改为被动句。中国人喜欢用
People believe…
Everyone says….
The teacher suggested that he…
可以考虑改成：
It is believed that ..
It is said that…
He was suggested to …
2.多多使用”It”,如Today is Saturday.改成
It is Saturday today.
He will get his pay tomorrow.改成
It will be pay day tomorrow.
It is believed…
It is said that…
It was suggested that…
The weather is fine… 改成
It is fine today…
3.汉语可以省略主语，但英语不能省略它。4.如果名词与指代的代词出现于主句与从句中，名词要放在主句里，而汉语却经常放在前面的从句里。如：
When she was not happy, Mary began to eat chocolate.
(In comparison: When Mary was not happy, she began to eat chocolate.
5. 在一个段落里（通常需要在三句以上成段），人名出现在第一句；后面不再用名字，可以用He, she, 等。如Tom…. He……. And it seems to him that…
但要记住不要只用he、she、I、they、 we;要学会用人称代词所有的形式来避免行文上的单调贫乏，如
me, my, mine; his, him; her, hers; them, their, theirs; us, our;..
I believe可以有很多种表达方式，如:
It seems to me that…
It is my belief that…
In my opinion,…
“I“这个刺眼的大写一定要少用！！！一篇短文中，”I”的出现次数无论如何不要超过三次！
6.写一篇作文，尤其是高考作文或四六级作文，句式要多变，比如有陈述句，主从句，分词短语、虚拟语气、几种时态等，因为通过这些才能显示出自己对语言的驾驭能力。写什么内容不重要，关键是怎样写。表述方式最重要。比如：
When he learnt about the sad news, Tom was very unhappy because he could not get that dream job.
改成：
Having learnt about the bad news, Tom could not cheer himself up as he had to give up all the hope of landing a good at the company.
7.正式的文体中，不要使用口语缩略词汇，如I don’t … He doesn’t…这一点现在还给我的语音学生有提到：
在国外的研究生博士生门，在论文中用“doesn’t have”,老师多数会改成改成“have not”这才是真正的老师。论文这么重大严肃的场合，避免缩略用语。
8.尽量变换使用不同词汇进行表达，避免抽象空洞的词汇，具体化。如good, bad, big, small, far, near…因为这些词汇没有什么具体意义。
如果想表达”far”，就应说明具体是多少英里或公里, 如：
My home town is about 1,500 miles from here.
如果想表示天气“热“，与其用”hot”不如用”39 degrees”，如：
The temperature went up to 39 degrees yesterday.
如果想表示“下雨“，就要考虑使用 drizzle, downpour; 如
In summer time, we have downpours almost every week.
如果想表达“冷“，不如用”chilly”;
It was chilly early in the morning, even in late May.
简单地说就是用具体的描述代替空洞的说法。
9.口语和作文中多用名词性词汇或短语。比如：
He sings well ------- He is a good singer.
He swims well ------ He is a good swimmer.
He eats a lot. ------ He is a big eater.
Barry loves sports. Every morning, he wakes up early and then does some physical exercise outside. Sometimes he walks his dog. The dog is big and active. When they see neighbours, Barry says “hi” whilst the dog barks…
Barry is very happy with his life…
改成：
Barry is very sportive. Every morning, he wakes up at 6 o’clock and then begins to work out, even when it is still chilly. Sometimes, he walks his dog, which is a German shepherd about 45 kilogrammes and very fond of running about. When any neighbor is in sight, Barry always greets whilst the dog gives out a few barks. …
Barry is a happy man indeed…
10.平时阅读，一定要留心别人遣词造句的特点，做一个爱阅读，欣赏阅读的人。思考一下如果你用自己的语言会是怎样描述，而文中又是如此描述。不断对比才能提高。打开任何一本书都能见到令人欣喜的英语用法。英语的词汇量全世界第一，那么是否有理由被认可为最优美的语言呢？
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