爱华网雅思考官写作范文：Road safety
考前需要多量阅读上乘范文，同时为自己目前的写作能力定位。设定一个适合自己风格的写作方法。
Before you ever arrive for the test, you need to read a good number of high-quality sample essays and you must know your own capabilities. Make a plan that fits your style.
雅思写作：那些范文才对你胃口?
举例一篇考官范文：道路安全
阅读优质范文的好处多多，然而最好是选择对你胃口的作品，免得食之无味。除了研读剑桥考官范文，考生可以访问以下网址，浏览所提供的范文。其中只有部分范文值得模仿, 借以吸取可口养分，补充你写作的内容，提升写作单项能力。
考生如果无从选择范文的优劣，那么谢振礼老师愿意代劳编辑。比方说，前考官simon发布了几十篇9分范文，全数收集在谢振礼写作讲义。另外其他外教满分范文300余篇，也经过择优录取，完全依据官方评分标准。
阅读时专注英文的3C：用得上的"concise"词汇，练得来的"correct"句子，学得到的"clear"修辞。词汇 words 精确适当，句子 sentences 文法正确，修辞 rhetoric 语言效率。
同时检验3T写作技巧：主题句 Thesis sentence，指标句 Topic sentence，过渡用语 Transitions。
>Writing topic: 雅思真题
Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
>Sample essay: 剑桥考官范文 四段13句--起2承5转5合1
--道路安全：考官范文应用3T--T1，T2，T3;3C--C1，C2，C3
T1 主题句：Thesis
出现在引言--In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.
出现在结论--In conclusion, while punishments can prevent bad driving, I believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced.
T2 指标句A与B：Topic sentence A, Topic sentence B
A放在中体A段的开头--On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely.
B放在中体B段的开头--On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do not punish drivers.
T3 过渡用语：举例 Transitions
On the one hand, on the other hand, as a result, for example, firstly, secondly, finally, in conclusion
C1 词汇恰当：concise
C2 句型变换：correct
C3 修辞效率：clear
第一段引言 introduction
1--People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. 引出问题：讨论如何改进交通安全。
2--In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits. 主题句：提出你答题的立场。申论主题，话分两头指标，A与B。
第二段中体A body paragraph
1--On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. 指标句A
2--Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. 支持A
3--There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. 支持A
4--The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. 支持A
5--As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully. 支持A
第三段中体B body paragraph
1--On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do not punish drivers. 指标句B
2--Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and this can be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test. 支持B
3--Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. 支持B
4--For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. 支持B
5--Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car. 支持B
第四段结论 conclusion
1--In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced. 在结尾段中必须重申主题
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