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Dear Sir or Madam,
I take great pleasure in recommending Qin Xuan, one of my favorite students, for admission into your distinguished university.
Miss Qin was admitted in 2004 at 19 years of age into the English Department of South Central University of Nationalities. It was a rare privilege she earned with her excellent academic performance through the years of her elementary and secondary school.
Miss Qin impressed me almost as she entered our university for the very first class. She ranked much higher than the other students in the class both in spoken English and all the other subjects. She has laid an exceedingly solid foundation in her major. She always stands out as a very extraordinary one with her talent in language learning .She also exhibited a keenly whetted and creative mind during class discussions. She is a diligent and smart student who always wants to learn more.
In my experience with Miss Qin, I was impressed with not only her extraordinary intelligence but also her ambitions and persistence towards life. As to her personality, I would like to say Miss Qin is a polite, energetic, warm-hearted, honest and upright student. She is always ready to help others. During my lectures, many students got confused at some points and I could always see Miss Qin help them during breaks. She is very popular among her fellow students and all the teachers in the English Department.
Further, the graduation paper for the B.A. of Miss Qin has impressessed both her supervisor and most teachers in the English Department. She is well prepared
for her paper and worked a lot for it. She has enough competence for academic research in her majoring field.
I am sure that Miss Qin will be an outstanding student in any teaching program that she may care to enroll in. I promise that her great intelligence, commitment to work and her kind nature will impress you deeply. So I would like to support her firmly in her quest recommendation into account when considering her application. I would greatly appreciate it you decide to accept her as she wishes, and I would like to provide more information upon your request.
Yours sincerely
Liao Yaoyao
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