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1、五星级必备作文
第一篇：做好小事的重要性（功能句式大集锦）
第二篇：英语学习（万能素材救命作文）
2、四星级必备作文
第三篇：教育汇报（图表作文）
第四篇 成功需要坚强意志力（话语评论）
第五篇 对我帮助最大的一位同学（开放性作文）
3、五星必备翻译：
第一篇：文化类必备
第二篇：教育读书类
第三篇：科技类
第四篇：生活饮食类
第五篇：鬼子看中国（经济、环境）
作文要背诵到走进考场前的最后一刻。拿到作文务必读三遍，找出体裁、话题和内容要求，尤其是其中的名动形副四类词，然后结合背诵的功能句和题干关键词写作文，尽量写背诵过得表达。
以下内容，只要认真掌握，写作翻译就必然提分。
1、但请牢牢记住：“看懂了”不等于“能记住”，“能记住”不等于“会应用”；因此，多动笔背写并仿写才是提升的关键。
2、记住：多篇作文中重复性表达是复习的重中之重。因为这些词汇、表达或句式可以使用在近十多次考试中，那么，就很有可能再次成为你写译提分的利器。
3、建议每篇作文和翻译都按照一下方式处理：抄写范文或译文---英译汉—汉译英—对比查错—背写出错之处！
救命的13句功能表达
1、In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of individuals to .....
2、Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it rather difficult/convenient/comfortable/necessary/ beneficial to ...
3、Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like this.
4、Apparently, this picture/saying/chart/phenomenon can be naturally associated
5、with the significance of .../the negative influences of .../ close relation between ...and ..../
6、If people intend to ...., it is advisable for them to ....
7、It is ....that (does/do not)enable ...to build up adequate knowledge, ability, confidence, experience.
As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the sig
8、nificance of.../ negative impacts of ...
9、As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great/no necessity for youngsters to enhance/ strengthen our quality by .....
10、Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates an
11、d acquaintances to cultivate this awareness/habit
12、If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our life, work and study will be hopeful and promising.
13、Do bear in mind: ...
1、
五星级必备作文
第一篇：做好小事的重要性（功能句式大集锦）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
首段：图画描述
（引入图画）This is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: (图画描述：人/物+动作+环境+文字) the youngster/ guy expresses his worries about “disposing of nuclear waste”; to his surprise, his father responds/answers: “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.”
二段：图画主题+现象+意义
(图画联系主旨) Obviously, this picture can be naturally associated with the importance of doing small things: (主题评论) if youngsters intend to achieve success, it is advisable for them to begin with little things. (现象概述) In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of teenagers to ignore tiny things in life: cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. (相关人+感受) Meanwhile, an increasing number of young people find it rather useless or unnecessary to deal with these things.(举例) A case in point is the boy in the picture. However, (意义) it is these small tasks that enable youngsters to build up adequate knowledge, ability and experience. (万能总结) As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of doing small things.
（补充举例2）Taking a look around, we can notice a great many young people like the boy in the picture.
(意义句补充) Doing small things brings us skills, arouses our enthusiasm/ passion for success, and helps us to make progress.
尾段：观点+建议+展望
(观点：尾段首句万能) As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by doing small things. (万能建议) Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness/habit. (展望1:)Sparing no efforts to do so, we can witness a hopeful and promising future of our life, work and study. (展望2:) Do bear in mind: no small progress, no success. /small progresses lead to a big success.
第二篇：英语学习（万能素材救命作文）
话题：On English Learning
内容要求（提纲）：1. 英语很重要；2. 学习英语中的各种困难；3. 如何学好英语
首段
(主题句：现象+意义) In contemporary world, English learning has gained great popularity and it is of great significance for youngsters to learn English well. (调查法描述) Based on a survey, a majority of international organizations or firms acknowledge that they prefer recruiting employees who can speak English fluently.
二段
However, English learners may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in learning. (主题句) For instance, a large number of students have difficulty memorizing words. Frequently, it is also difficult for them to understand the rules of grammar. In addition, though some are good at reading or writing, they cannot express themselves freely in oral English.
尾段
Then, how to get a good command of (学好) this language? I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Only practice can help one to master the rules of grammar and remember words. And it is also through practice that one can speak and write fluently, and there is no other way. If we try our utmost to practice English every day, the future of our English learning will be promising and hopeful. (180words)
2、
四星级必备作文
第三篇：教育汇报（图表作文）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
首段：图表描述
(引出图表)This is a simple but enlightening chart by US Bureau of Labor: (图表描述万能) in 2010, it had become a trend for doctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551, $1272 and $1038. Meanwhile, other individuals could not enjoy satisfactory earnings, if they did not receive better education.
二段：主题评论+现象+意义
(图表联系主题)Obviously, this chart can be naturally associated with the importance of education: （图表内容评论）if individuals intend to acquire/ get better earnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher degrees. （现象）In contemporary America, it is a common phenomenon for a host of companies/ firms/ corporations/ organizations to hire/ employ/ recruit doctors and masters and pay them better salaries. (相关人+感受) And an increasing number of youngsters find it rather difficult to get better jobs, if they do not get better education. (意义) It is education that enables them to build up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important tasks. (总结)As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.
尾段：观点+号召
（观点）As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. （号召）Do bear in mind: education is or means a worthy investment.
第四篇 成功需要坚强意志力（话语评论）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
首段
(话语引入)This is a humorous but enlightening remark by smokers: “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.” (话语联系主题)Obviously, this saying can be naturally associated with the importance of strong will: (话语评论)if a smoker intends to quit smoking, it is advisable for him to have adequate will to resist the temptation of cigarettes.
二段：现象+意义
(现象)In contemporary society, it has become a trend for some youngsters to face various difficulties in life and study. Meanwhile, a host of teenagers find it exceedingly difficult to achieve success, if they have no strong will. A case in point is quitting smoking. (意义) It is our strong will that enables us to build up enough confidence, hope and courage. As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of strong minds. (调查法)In addtion, according to a survey, a majority of successful people admit that a strong will is the key to their success.
尾段：观点+建议+号召
(观点)As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by developing/ cultivating strong will. (建议)Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to conquer difficulties with our strong will. (号召)Do bear in mind: no strong will, no success.
第五篇 对我帮助最大的一位同学（开放性作文）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a classmate who has influenced you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【范文】
In college, it is a common phenomenon for a host of students to attend classes and participate in activities with their classmates. Meanwhile, an increasing number of teenagers find it quite necessary to learn other classmates’ merits. A typical example is that my classmate, Lee, has influenced me most.
In the first college year, I had a variety of difficulties in English study. For instance, I had trouble memorizing words. Sometimes, it was also difficult for me to understand the rules of grammar. Although I could read and write, I cannot express myself freely in oral English. Then, how to get a command of this language for me? Lee established English Club and invited me to take part in various activities of learning. Now, I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Lee’s help enables me to master the rules of grammar and remember words. It is also through oral practice with Lee that I can speak and write fluently.
As a college student, I deem that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance our quality by learning from others. Lee has influenced me not only in English learning, and I will also bear in mind his other significant virtues: a strong will, confidence, optimism and diligence.（207words）
3、
五星必备翻译
翻译冲刺复习的“三遍学习法”
翻译无论是难还是简单，都不要硬着头皮逐字翻译。一定要先提炼主干，将整个句子分成主干和修饰成分分别处理。主干翻译不出来，就换主语、谓语、系动词或宾语，修饰成分如果翻译不成一个单词，则考虑使用短语、从句或单独成句处理，如果实在不会写的宁可不写也不要写错。还有，翻译一定要懂得借鉴背过的作文里的表达。
下面几篇精选的翻译话题，请按照一下步骤进行练习，必然提升英语能力和考试分数。
第一遍：抄写英语译文，之后翻译成汉语加深对英文词汇理解
第二遍：25分钟仔细对比自己的译文和参考译文的差别，并尝试背诵关键词；
第三遍：在第二天不看参考译文的情况下再翻译一遍，对比译文找出错的地方，提醒自己下次不再犯类似的错误并记难点词汇（如参考译文黑体部分词汇）。
以下翻译按照常考话题分类，请拿到本资料练习的同学务必关注参考译文中该话题相关词汇的表达。
此外，很多考生傻傻的以为考过的话题就不会再考。但是，偏偏不是如此，例如2013年12月考的“中餐”与2015年6月考的“中国主食”就很接近。
第一篇：文化类必备
Part IV Translation (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to translate a passage from Chinese into English. You should write your answer on Answer Sheet 2.
剪纸（paper cutting）是中国最为流行的传统民间艺术形式之一。中国剪纸有一千五百多年的历史，在明朝和清朝时期（the Ming and Qing Dynasties）特别流行。人们常用剪纸美化居家环境。特别是在春节和婚庆期间，剪纸被用来装饰门窗和房间，以增加喜庆的气氛。剪纸最常用的颜色是红色，象征健康和兴旺。中国剪纸在世界各地很受欢迎，经常被用作馈赠外国友人的礼物。（149词）
【参考译文】
Paper cutting is one of China’s most popular traditional folk arts. Chinese paper cutting has a history of more than 1,500 years. It was widespread particularly during the Ming and Qing Dynasties. People often beautify their homes with paper cuttings. During the Spring Festival and wedding celebrations, in particular, paper cuttings are used to decorate doors, windows and rooms in order to enhance the joyous atmosphere. The color most frequently used in paper cuttings is red, which symbolizes health and prosperity. Chinese paper cutting is very popular around the world and it is often given as a present to foreign friends. （101words）
第二篇：教育读书类
Part IV Translation (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to translate a passage from Chinese into English. You should write your answer on Answer Sheet 2.
中国教育工作者早就认识到读书对于国家的重要意义。有些教育工作者2003年就建议设立全民读书日。他们强调，人们应当读好书，尤其是经典著作，通过阅读，人们能更好地学会感恩、有责任心和与人合作，而教育的目的正是要培养这些基本素质。阅读对于中小学生尤为重要，假如他们没有在这个关键时期培养阅读的兴趣，以后要养成阅读的习惯就很难了。
【参考译文】
For a long time, educational workers in China have come to realize the significance of reading for the nation. Since 2003, some of them have suggested that a National Day for Reading should be set up. They emphasize that people should reading good books, especially classic ones. Through reading, individuals can better learn to be grateful, responsible and cooperative with others. And the purpose of education is to cultivate these basic qualities. Reading is of vital importance for students in primary and middle schools，because if they do not foster interest of reading in this key period, it will be difficult for them to develop the habit of reading in future.
第三篇：科技类
Part IV Translation (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to translate a passage from Chinese into English. You should write your answer on Answer Sheet 2.
中国的互联网社区是全世界发展最快的。2010年，中国约有4.2亿网民( netizen )，且人数还在迅速增长。互联网的日渐流行带来了重大的社会变化。中国网民往往不同于美国网民。美国网民更多的是受实际需要的驱使，用互联网为工具发电子邮件、买卖商品、规划旅程或付款。中国网民更多是出于社交原因使用互联网，因而更广泛地使用QQ、聊天室等。
【参考译文】
The Internet community in China is developing fastest in the world. In 2010, there were approximately 420 million netizens, and the number is still on speedy increase. The growing popularity of the Internet leads to significant social changes. Usually, Chinese netizens are different from their American counterparts. Netizens in U.S. tend to focus on their practical needs for the Internet, which serves as a tool to send emails, purchase and sell commodities, plan tours, or pay. For Chinese netizens, the Internet is more frequently used for social purpose, and thus, QQ and chatting rooms are widely preferred.
第四篇：生活饮食类
Part IV Translation (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to translate a passage from Chinese into English. You should write your answer on Answer Sheet 2.
在西方人心目中，和中国联系最为密切的基本食物是大米。长期以来，大米在中国人的饮食中占据很重要的地位，以至于有谚语说“巧妇难为无米之炊”。中国南方大多数种植水稻，人们通常以大米为食；而华北大部分地区因为过于寒冷或过于干燥，无法种植水稻，那里的主要作物是小麦。在中国，有些人用面粉做面包，但大多数人用面粉做馒头和面条。
【参考译文】
In the eyes of western people, rice is the basic food which is most closely associated with China. For a long time, rice has been playing such an indispensable role in Chinese people’ diet that there is saying –“A smart housewife cannot cook without rice.” In south China, a majority of people plant rice and live on it. However, in most places of north China, it is too cold or too dry to plant rice and thus, the main crop there is wheat. In China, some people make bread with flour while a larger proportion of people use flour to make steamed breads and noodles.
第五篇：经济环境（鬼子看中国）
当外国人第一次来到中国，他们不仅惊讶于中国经济的快速发展，还惊讶于经济发展带来的环境恶化。经济发展确实改善了人们的生活，但恶劣的空气和食品质量又会降低人们的幸福感。虽然很多人说这是发展的必然途径，但他们忽略了一点，即经济发展造成的环境伤害很难弥补。比如北京的雾霾（smog）已经严重影响人们的生活。幸运的是，政府已经意识到这个问题，一系列改善环境的行动正在进行。
【参考译文】
When foreigners firstly come to China, they are shocked/ surprised by not only the rapid/speedy development of China’s economy, but also environmental pollution by economic development. The advance of economy truly enhances people’s life, but bad air and food quality reduce people’s happiness. Although a host of people said this is a necessary trend of development, it is rather difficult to recover the environmental damage because of economic development. A case in point is that the smog has seriously influenced people’s life. Fortunately, the government has come to realize this problem, and a series of actions /measures have been taken to improve environment.
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